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Tuesday, July 4, 2017

My CAT poem

Here is a link to my writing.  In my class we have been learning to write poems and I made one hope you like it





https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_7_LLZoQRrPaHQxRnRFV0theDA/view


It as a bit hard there was alot of noise in the background but I made it stop by saying please be quite.


It was also hard making up some words for the poem it's called cat's.



Blog ya later




1 comment:

  1. kia ora skyla I like how the screencastify turned out even though i was there doing the ticker.
    Did you think about going a bit slower cause i could barely read your poem that you made.
    Next time you could you a bit more punctuation of how you said your poem.

    From Tru blog you later

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